IN THE DARK OF THE NIGHT

Sorry if rubish i jst this min wrote.

In the dark of the night i seek my life.

Knowing wrong from right to that guiding light.

Running so fast i hear my breath.

My heart, is it failing is this death?

 

The harder i run the aching i feel.

Knowing these wounds never to heal.

But to be split back open by that forest ahead.

Talking and staring messing with my head.

 

Enchanted am crazy what ever next?

My body so numb feels like it's hexed.

My feet become more thudding my breath so moist.

Now my thoughts feelings are voiced.

 

My head cracked open my thoughts pour out.

Not quiet like a dream but a nightmare they shout.

The shadows of doubt the voices of fear.

Tears stream i don't want to be here.

 

Slowly i fall in a huddle alone.

WIshing and hoping i could go home.

Suddenly i'm falling deep deep away.

I wake up knowing my fears are at bay.

 

Reviews

[Moonlight]

Nice work...I enjoyed the rhyming.
Well thought of!
-Moonlight

[Lia]

Great piece, good ryhming and kept me interested. thanks x