Ravioli I love you! plz pull through!

I know people think Mice are ugly but i love my mice! And my one mouse Ravioli well she has a tumour and is having an operation to remove it tommorow. Her chances of survival are slim! But i have faith she'll make it this is for her i love her!!!

The numbness that flows through my brains

The time is ticking what still remains.

Only one chance to survive.

I want you so much to stay alive.

 

Your little body so fragile but weak.

But only life of which you seek.

So little so tiny but you were fine.

But your wherever you are truly mine!

 

The shock of the vet which made my heart burst.

Two decisions which was worst?

To put you to sleep or have the op.

The two greatest decisions i've ever got!

 

You watched me read or watched tv.

When i was down you used to tickle me.

Your little whiskers that kissed my nose.

But to have you gone i'd be froze.

 

Never seeing you again or touching your fur.

I want to block the sound so i can't hear!

I know you'll pull through or i'll be crushed.

i should have gone with my feeling and rushed.

 

 I knew i should have acknowledged It feels like my fault.

Mind keeps rewinding before this happened i come to a halt.

Flashing in front of me the life that you've lived.

It seems so short so weak so sieved.

 

Being stuck in a cage am i cruel

I feel like an idiot playing a fool.

I'll have faith you'll pull through and carry on to live.

For your life to be expanded stronger than a sieve.

 

To my sweet Ravioli only a mouse.

But you gave me someone to talk to out of my house.

Was there in the night when i was awake.

When i was in a crying right state.

 

You'd tickle my noise i'd feed you you'd bead.

Nibbling cutely on your tiny sunflower seed.

If you sadly shall die i'll love you everyday.

In my heart always and ever you will stay.

 

 

Author's Note

Sorry for mistakes x

Reviews

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very touching and cute. It reminds me of our family dog she was short with beautiful brown and black fur. She use to help watch the children - she would bark if they started leaving the yard and then nip at there heals gently. She was the smartest dog I ever saw. Her name was Shalom which is Hebrew for peace. When they where haveing the peace summit in W.V. we drove from M.D. through the town with our dog and kids. Everyone had a great laugh as we saw our dogs name in the windows all over town. Eventually she had health problems and we had the vet put her to sleep. We all cried. So I feel for any one who loves a pet. Thanks.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great piece, I had what started out to be two mice. Then they all multiplied to about 30. Eventually, I'm not sure what happened but the babies decided to make a meal of the parents and I was forced to let them go out into the wild.

My thoughts for Ravioli - I hope he pulls through!

Rayne