First Time!

Just a poem i thought of!

The touch of his hand the softness of lips.

Passion running through his body touching his finger tips!

Like a live wire he seemed to glow.

No stopping her Where would she go?

The sexual tension that was met by the eye.

This was a chance you simply couldn't buy!

Nervous? His skin was all tense!

Was this for real was it making any sense?

The pressure was building the heat was intense.

The question repeating is this really sense?

To lose his dignity? Was he gonna get it right?

Or was he gonna ruin this night?

To take his time or jump in the bed?

To think for his self or listen to what friends had said?

This was his decision to make.

So leave it or take. 

Author's Note

sorry fro grammar and any other mistakes i'm half asleep!

Reviews

[Beka]

I love how you worded the emotions that we feel when we try to decide if we're ready for that big move.
A lot of us don't think it through enough. The heat of the moment is a deamon far worse then the devil. As for grammar I didn't see much mistake, but I'm pretty terrible at spelling so I wouldn't exactly take my word for it. But I do enjoy this.
Lovely write.

[Brit]

even tho im a chick its kinda how i felt i wasnt sure if i should just jump into it or make it sumthin special and i think this is what most people think b4 they wanna do it or go to i love it =]

[Poeticpiers]

I remember this only too well. You got it about right for most guys the first time is a disaster