Story of heartache!

This is something i wrote (fiction)!

She's as light as a feather and as dark as the night.

She's a breath taking sight.

Red ruby lips and blue ocean eyes.

Crying a river comes out of her eyes.

Not knowing it would hurt to be in love.

Simply soreing then crashing from above.

To love and lose is too much to bare.

But she can never act like she doesn't care.

Her heart is still cracking.

With love she is lacking.

No on her own she feels herself letting go

How could this happen how could she know?

Jelousy anger passion and love.

All soaring so lightly like wings on a dove.

It was a matter of time before that big drop.

Now everythings over everything full stop.

Now tears on her pillow wash away the sorrow of the day.

Refresh and ready for a bright new day!

Author's Note

sorry for mistakes x

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

Wow this is fantastic! There's so many colours and emotions in this, it's very vivid and bright and poignant. There is a lot of emotion behind this, and this shows through your use of colour and feelings. The rhyme scheme maybe needs tweaking and tightening, but that's only if you wanted to edit this poem further. Otherwise, this is a brilliant piece of work!