Feeling of sepration?

Feeling of sepration?

A Poem by Gema

It a two second conversation which hurts inside!
With little words that you say or hide.
The skipping of subjects to suit your mood.
You on and off me just like your food.
The awkward situation the we get in.
My stuttering my words wondering where to begin.
Should i stay and talk or just walk away?
Again the silence of what to say?
Is it tearing us apart or is it just me?
Or is it the truth and you just cannot see?
Hoping our love will be strong till the end!
Because also knowing i'd lose a best friend!

© 2008 Gema


Author's Note

Gema
Sorry for mistakes!

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i love it i've had this feeling before and it makes me think back to a time in my life. its beautifly written and i love how you ad color to your writing. cant wait to read more.
~brit

Posted 16 Years Ago


In good presentation on the meaning of silence in a relationship. Silence is the hardest message to read and yet sometimes the missing information is within its timing. Good work, thanks.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 31, 2008
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Gema
Gema

South Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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Hello, Gema here. I've written since I don't know when, it vaires and can be very mood driven. I am a huge marvel fan, enjoy the supernatural and mythology in general. I am also a huge lover o.. more..

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