This is extremely witty! You knew that I would appreciate this d:
As for the punctuation... It's a matter of preference I guess, I would have punctuated every line (I like to think) but I don't think it is necessarily necessary (Mr. Redundant here) in this particular piece. Here is how I see it, if your next line isn't capitalized, then you should have some sort of punctuation whether it is a , ; or- lol.... That just opens the argument that any line that is followed by a capitalized word should be followed with a . ? or ! so it really is back to being a matter of preference.
I love Sir Norton's fiery wall... Brilliant! I suggest highlighting fiery in deep crimson like you did plinking in violet... Maybe Electronic as a voltage blue or something.
Your rhyming is subtle and it really adds to the piece... This is a very, very, very, very cool piece. Wicked!
BTW, did I mention that it was an F.A.P.? Because it is d:
This piece is filled with such beautiful vivid images. I like the way you take the reader on a journey of internetting. This piece deals with subject matter that most everyone can relate to. Great job.
Is it wrong to describe a poem as adorable??? I can't think of a better word. You are the queen of clever. I love Sir Norton, oh heck, I just love the whole thing.
This is extremely witty! You knew that I would appreciate this d:
As for the punctuation... It's a matter of preference I guess, I would have punctuated every line (I like to think) but I don't think it is necessarily necessary (Mr. Redundant here) in this particular piece. Here is how I see it, if your next line isn't capitalized, then you should have some sort of punctuation whether it is a , ; or- lol.... That just opens the argument that any line that is followed by a capitalized word should be followed with a . ? or ! so it really is back to being a matter of preference.
I love Sir Norton's fiery wall... Brilliant! I suggest highlighting fiery in deep crimson like you did plinking in violet... Maybe Electronic as a voltage blue or something.
Your rhyming is subtle and it really adds to the piece... This is a very, very, very, very cool piece. Wicked!
BTW, did I mention that it was an F.A.P.? Because it is d:
There is a very good use of format, color and spacing within this poem. I hesitate to use the word clever but I shall. BUT where is the punctuation!!! MAWHAAHAAHAA!!!