EXPRESSION

 

Aged woven baskets

brim of petals yet unwritten

A history seasoned flawlessly still

in the offing amidst shadows sleeping

Tender winds of awareness puff lucidity

gently strewing luminous expression

Awakening gifts of syntax in flight

alighting life's cobbled pathways

 

March 5, 2008

 

Reviews

[C.T. Bailey]

"Tender winds of awareness..." I could see your words and thoughts flowing tenderly....creating the "petals" as yet unwritten. This poem was like breathing for the poet. It was a soft oracle of worded thought overflowing from your "basket of plenty" and culminating ultimately in the eloquence that is your work.

Superb.
Todd

[Ron B]

This is very creative and I like it.

[tkrosevear]

Unleash the creativity...
Absolute BEAUTY!!!

[Sarah]

I *loved* the description in this piece! It was amazing, and told a story, without any action even taking place. xD I especially loved the final two lines, very beautiful. This is really amazing, I enjoyed reading it ^___^