EXPRESSION

EXPRESSION

A Poem by Becca

 

Aged woven baskets

brim of petals yet unwritten

A history seasoned flawlessly still

in the offing amidst shadows sleeping

Tender winds of awareness puff lucidity

gently strewing luminous expression

Awakening gifts of syntax in flight

alighting life's cobbled pathways

 

March 5, 2008

 

© 2008 Becca


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"Tender winds of awareness..." I could see your words and thoughts flowing tenderly....creating the "petals" as yet unwritten. This poem was like breathing for the poet. It was a soft oracle of worded thought overflowing from your "basket of plenty" and culminating ultimately in the eloquence that is your work.

Superb.
Todd

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Now how can you say you just hammer out words? This is so delicate and just beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And you've expressed yourself in a creation of absolute perfection. Every word lights the piece. It's lovely, truly lovely.

Thank you so much for letting me share - 'A history seasoned flawlessly still / in the offing amidst shadows sleeping'.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Tender winds of awareness..." I could see your words and thoughts flowing tenderly....creating the "petals" as yet unwritten. This poem was like breathing for the poet. It was a soft oracle of worded thought overflowing from your "basket of plenty" and culminating ultimately in the eloquence that is your work.

Superb.
Todd

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job! I figured I would review from the back to the front so I don't miss anything (: My favorite word was lucidity... I have to remember to use the word in something of my own because it is such a cool word.

You had some very awesome word choice in this... It is stunning in it's lucidity (:

Wonderful job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love your work...the way you choose your words with such detail...excellent!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah to write...........quite lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautifully succinct and poignant write. You definitely paint a picture with your poetry in this one. Well done. Quite admirable. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicely done, your words project your muse as what inspires the pen to take flight
beautifully done with well chosen wording, defining expression in its many ways
drawing the imagination with select diverse images, I enjoyed reading this thanks

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I admire everything about this write. I love the imagery you painted; my mind's eye saw these aged woven baskets brimming with petals unwritten. I could see this history, seasoned flawlessly (brilliant imagery) sleeping in the shadows just waiting to happen.

History sleeping in the shadows, is history in the making - not quite ready. Every moment in history has its season. I saw a double meaning in (seasoned) This thought blew me away! Never too early, nor too late, but always on time!

Each & every line captivated me! It's going in my favorites!

Brilliant piece of poetry...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This echoes your thoughts in your bio perfectly...you were born to write words of such beauty, to inspire others to think creatively as you do...that's what good writers do, you know ;-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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