Dress me

The first dress has a slit all the way to my hip

It hugs her body in all the right places

The black color makes me look mysterious

Her friends shook their heads

The next dress was a short skater dress

It waved outwards right at my hips

The color was a sky blue making me look refreshed 

They all giggled at the sight

The last dress was a short strapless dress

It hugged her body tightly 

It was a seductive red

Her friends smiled at each other

The girl merely stood there

She thought she looked good in the first 

She felt joyful in the second

This one seemed to reviling

too open

It wasn't her

It was her friends playing dress up with her

Then they were off to the party

Reviews

[Lizardo]

I like the poem, I really do.
The only thing that I must say is that from time to time I confused withe the first and third person point of view. (You should check that)
But leaving that behind, I like it.

[Kietsu Negative]

A couple of grammar errors but not enough to ruin the compelling message you're trying to deliver, also is it me or are you trying to do she/me situation on purpose cause its very fitting to the scheme of the poem.

[Smokey]

Thankx :)
I know grammar defiantly isn't my strong suit :P