Last tears

The smirk never left his face

His arm hanging over the girl's shoulder

Her eyes stuck to me

I stood alone

Nobody backing me up

Nobody hanging by my side

His eyes locked on mine 

His hand raised a tad just to shoo me away

She simply copied his gesture giggling and leaving into him 

I couldn't have cried 

I couldn't have let the tears trickle down and give him that joy

I couldn't have let him know his won

I simply smiled 

Curtsied 

Left 

If only I could have been that strong I thought

The tears trickling down my face as he passed me with his new girl by his side

I knew though deep down I knew he will miss me realize that he didn't win

The tears I cry now are the lasts thoughts I spend on him

These tears aren't my heart wanting him

Its me regretting the time I spent with him

Reviews

[MaKenzie AS]

Wow I know this feeling all too well! I think you've captured what most of us have all felt at one time or another.

[Insight "MH"]

This was special! The last two lines were epic. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Insight.

[Living_Shadowz]

Wow I like this it's very powerful

[Bear]

(She simply copied his gesture giggling and leaving into him) did you mean leaning into him?
You express emotion with words very well, and you didn't demoralize you characters integrity at the end showing class. Well done, a pleasure to read :~)

[Smokey]

Ya I did mean leaning thankx for catching that :)

[Lizardo]

Wow this is really deep. I like it :)
It's really good, and I like how you express your feelings in it.
Great poem!

[paige burnett]

I love this, I can relate. Im sure a lot of people can. You seem to of put my emotions into words, me not letting him win. That is exactly what I did.
Much love
paige

[Smokey]

Thanks!
I don't want to let a bad guy win! He doesn't deserve it!

[HipsterPrincess17]

Wow this is a really good poem and very emotional

I love the part when you said-

"I simply smiled

Curtsied

Left




If only I could have been that strong"

Keep up the good work!!!

Your friend
Lia

[Smokey]

Thank you lia
Its always really hard to be strong I'm sure everybody wants to be stronger somehow :)