Forgive and your sins will be forgiven !

Forgive and your sins will be forgiven !

A Poem by SmittyJas
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The power of forgiveness is within you soul !

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If we could all see 
within our spirit
We would be of kindness
To Strangers
In the streets of society
Many would on go hungry
Or be bare with no shoes to ware

© 2022 SmittyJas


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Thing is....most people don't look within themselves. I agree with Spamalott, you may want to edit before posting. Many would on go hungry.. Do you mean, many would go on hungry. ...no shoes to ware, should be, no shoes to wear. Good thought though.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The ways of spelling say that you should edit more carefully...and learn to spell.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The ways of God surely are to cothes the naked and feed those who are hungry !

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2022
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Tags: The spiritual Life

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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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