Every chance is a chance at loving you

Love poem for Life.

Every Chance is a chance of loving you
BY Jim Smith

Everyday I awake
With a soul that has a heartache
For I am in Love with Loving you
If I only can get it right

I can knock the ball right out of sight
We will share a life for two
In a home full of love
You Just got to give to me

That second chance at romancing you
Open you heart to me
and you will see my heart soul and mind
are bent on loving you throughout a lifetime
Share a house and a white picket fence

Kids in the back yard chasing the dog
From the Love that we made
Every Chance Is A Chance of Loving You
It's your mind heart and soul

That I am willing to steal
A lifetime of love and growing old
With the Lord watching over our shoulders
So Much Love in the house

That we share and the love we made
The warmths of all seasons shared inside
I would be proud to call 
You wife for life.

Reviews

[Jackie]

You show such passion in your writing. I can surely see your strength in your beliefs and such positivity. Its a wonderful sight to see, to read about. Keep it up smitty.:-)

[Wolf_Lord]

Son, I am only gonna tell you this once... You should write Hallmark Cards. This is perfect for one and not too long to be accommodated. This flows better than a greased eel. The way you put the elements together into a comprehensive whole is fantastic. The ending is perfect.
Anthony Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

[Cryingkate]

Nicely done.... A Smitten image of an old farm house with sun baked children and puppy dog tails. I see A happy woman with apron smiling and hanging laundry. All is home Sweet Home

[Ellen Kolman]

Beautiful...I love how you express the joy of the love in your life...BRAVO

[Ruth]

Beautifully heartfelt...the heart is softly devoted here and tenderly portrayed, lovely...

[SmittyJas]

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

[Brian M. Peeples]

This was brilliantly thought of and well-written. Fantastic, even. It comes from the heart, as all poetry should. And you definitely painted a picture in my mind, that I even put myself in the shoes of the character and lived out this vision. Imagery is everything when it comes to poetry, and you definitely did well on it. Very nice, thank you for the read request!

[SmittyJas]

thanks for your time and your comment.

[Nisreen]

Sounds like The perfect proposâl to me.
Dont we all for That chance to share any form Of emotion and care

I Truly admire your words :)

[SmittyJas]

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment as you did nice to here from my peers.

[wordman]

loving you,that about sums it up..