Everything that makes your heart go Boom

Everything that makes your heart go Boom

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Lets Talk about the Joys in my life

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Everything that makes my heart go boom
The love of family the love of you
And the Love of neighbors as they are friends
Blessed with the love of friendship from within

Lets talk about the joys in my life
Family Friends and a little thing called a wife
She would be my friend for life
Every struggle we have made together

We made it through every kind of bad weather
With the support of friends
which we have many
We make it through any struggle

We built our castle on hard rock
and good foundation
Home is where our hearts are shared
We don't leave our Closets bare

We fill them with the love of both our hands
A sentimental share of love
Which no one can divide
As long as we have our love we will have our pride

I look to the lonely stars above
Naming one for you
Forever to be your guiding light
Throughout the starry night

My extended loving hands
reaching out for you
In moments of distress
Our love to last forevermore

Just like the love we shared before
guided are the two hearts of ours
Heart strings tied together as one
knotted unbreakable bond

As I write to you my one and only 
Love song
It brightens up your heavy heart
Makes it light as a feather

You get misty when it's raining
As we walk the lonely road
We join our hands together
In unity of love divine

Everything that makes your heart go Boom
Is when it is right next to mine
beating as if they were one heart
In love for all time You forever mine

© 2016 SmittyJas


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such a beautiful and lovely write. I can always sense such passion in you writing, such a warm calming feeling.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful write about your love....bravo

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shared with the love of both pairs of hands...I like that sentiment. Nice write. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very sweet poem. Made me smile. My favorite lines: "I look to the lonely stars above / Naming one for you"... "Heart strings tied together as one / knotted unbreakable bond"... "my one and only / Love song". The unique images throughout this poem show how heartfelt it is, and I am touched by the sincerity of the love expressed in this piece. Very nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


building the castle on hard rock and a good foundation sure makes the rough times easier. Well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice to focus on joys for a while, the important things pave the way to smiles...lovely...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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