Will she see my weaknesses

Will she see my weaknesses

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Love at second glance

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As she takes that second glance
we she see my weaknesses
or see straight to the heart of a good man
Seek only the soul and not the faults

that everyone has I'm not perfect
and the first to admit it I stumble in the dark
and need a helping hand
now and again

Will she look past my faults
I not so smart not to bright
But I did ok
We struggled along the way

Time went by fast
Good times could not last
We worked hard and fast
Keeping the bills about water

Life couldn't get any harder
But the kids grown up
and we move on
now we just try to get along

© 2016 SmittyJas


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Life has a motion of its own and ebbs and flows, if the love is unconditional then it will last the run of time...nicely thought through :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 15, 2016
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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