She was My Flower In God's Garden

Let's Pray She Stays that way

She is my Flower 

In God's garden

Living off the land

and the water's that fall

From the Canopy

Like leaves from the trees

In the autumn breeze

I would Pick her flower's

As we walked by

Talk for hours

Of our plans to wed 

and have a family tie

Sometimes she would be sad

and she would shed a tear and cry

I tried to make her happy

Like the Blue In The Sky

Sometimes this was a mystery to me

How does this Mechanics work

and somedays not to make her weep

For it is the happiness I seek

Talking for hours

with no repeat

Made us happy and compete

I was happy holding her hands

It was heart warming

and tender to my soul

Boy meets Girl

Your Mind starts to twirl

It's a good thing we met 

When we did I loved her so

I let her know

I wanted to keep her for life

Make her my wife

She was a pretty Gal to me

I did not see no faults you see

I'm Glad she came my way

No more I have to say

I'm Going to love her every day

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

Beauitful I really enjoyed this

[Cryingkate]

Sounds to me like perhaps your love brought to surface some pains of love for her.
Sometimes we carry things too long and they can ruin the now.
Perhaps, she will learn this thru the reflection of your love.
Maybe not today but tomorrow.
It is good that you saw where you needed to be and what you wanted.

I guess you know to look for someone who can let go and enjoy the love now.
This is a good write Smitty and good lessons in it.

[Valentine]

True love is hard to find these days. Valentine