Away From this House

Away From this House

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Romantic Poetry

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Life away from this house
Is lonely without you
Our house without your love
Is not our home
Since you been gone I been left here thinking
What a life we had together
We weathered every storm
But now that you have left and you are gone
This House is no longer our home
For love does not live here anymore
Only Ghost of what once was
Shadows the rooms and hallways
The loving home is no more
The children we had have grown and gone
They were not enough to keep this love strong
But they were the beginning
I did not look for another woman
but love has fallen apart
We walked our separate ways
Never to walk back that way again
Away from this house
we still call the Kids family
and their family is our family
we walk the straight and narrow path
That where never our two roads my pass
Our kids come first before we 
Completely walked away
Our lives are not a total mistake
It just hurts the kids 
When its all to late
But we both are trying to walk
That straight and narrow path
Where the married couples 
who stick things out
Run the three legged race
at a slower pace
They end up with that 
House that is a home with love
and healthy kids natured 
With love and respect for each other

© 2015 SmittyJas


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Well..It is a very heart wrenching piece, the line that gets me is "we walked our separate ways, never to walk back that way again'' I broke up with my fiance and I can feel that hurt all over again reading this work.. very deep, thanks for publishing it!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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