Angel Fish

Angel Fish

A Poem by SmittyJas
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The best fish in the tank

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Angel Fish Best fish in the tank
Looking at them must be created by a good God
So delicate and poetry in motion
I will let them swim in my ocean

Angel Fish they make up my nation
They swim for north to south
Making a migration
But deep down they are tropical fish of the sea

Coming to live in my fresh water tank for me
So Grand children gather around and see
All my pretty fishes I have with me
Angel Fish Angel Fish Let the other ones be

© 2015 SmittyJas


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What a lovely post Smitty! I too love to watch fish swim in their little round homes. I have one beautiful Betta and when he sees me coming near his bowl he goes crazy swimming 'round and 'round. (It's not that he loves to see me....he just knows he's about to be fed! LOL.) Thanks for this very nice post my friend. ~Sharon

Posted 8 Years Ago


They are beautiful aren't they. Hope the grand children enjoy them. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Smitty: Your writing are always so interesting. Made me think about my dead gold fish of long ago; seriously angel fish are beautiful and as a metaphor they could be anything beautiful, sweet and as you say let the other ones be. Thank you so much. Dale

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good Poem especially the last line:
''Angel Fish Angel Fish Let the other ones be''.
great job, i mean the metaphor of ''angel fish''.

Posted 10 Years Ago


great poem smitty like your pictures my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very cool, yes angel fish are very pretty!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2015
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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