Just another breakup song

Just another breakup song

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Hay baby what went wrong

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Baby Just another breakup song
Have I really done you wrong
I'm Just another sentimental fool
Waving my heart around

Will you listen
will you change my frown upside down
My heart is broken
my faith is weak

WIthout you baby 
I'll be dead in a week
I'm shedding all my tears
that my love fears are out the door

Don't walk away from me once more
You are killing me
day by day
My heart pounds faster when you walk away

I can't live without you
I can't laugh or sing
for you are my everything
You're my reason for living

And for what ever you done
I am forgiving
Because my hand should be in your hand
My lips should touch your lips

I don't belong to anyone else
But you Dear
Hay baby what went wrong
Is this just another breakup song

© 2015 SmittyJas


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Smitty: You have certainly put a smile on my face today!!!
And for what ever you done (YOU DONE)
I am forgiving
Because my hand should be in your hand
My lips should touch your lips
& Is this just another breakup song....Clever; love it...Thank you.....Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sad with an essence of longing in it... First the Romeo and Juliet piece and then this. You really are a romantic :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is kind of sad it is beautiful thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like the last line> Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is kind of sad it is beautiful thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 26, 2015
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Tags: Has our love gone south

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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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