The Spider Bite

The Spider Bite

The spider bite then I fell in love

It's a tall tale to say

But things had to go her way

It was a little pinch on my neck

Oh I said what the heck

Got a hold of my love nerve

One pinch then out of sight

We were in love for life

She didn't have to bite me twice

But it would of been twice as nice

The Cat chase away the mice

A love come down upon our heads

Heaven spread

The mercy kind

Open a blind eye

So we could see face to face

Our love from deep down in our soul

Our hearts glowed and warm

Hearts warm Hearts warm

couldn't sing a better song

Hearts warm all day long

That's the prefect sound to our song

Come on every one sing along

Join right in with harmony

use a little melody

Get in rhythm with the band

Come everyone take a stand

See the love between this woman and this man

Meant to last forever and a day

Till their maker calls them away

In love day by day they stay

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Loved the flow! I really am tempted to call it graceful..
It was elegant, delightful, and delicate in a good way! :)

[wordman]

well i,ve never heard that old cupid came as a spider

[Cody Williams]

Beautiful write Smitty! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Jamestown]

Fantastic, flowing message! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[child of God]

Beautiful my freind it was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing this write

[Valentine]

Another sweet write from the guy who is hung up on his wife. Valentine