Pour down the rain on me

My life falling in a tail spin

it's my life and no body cares

I tried to share

but no body there

It's pour down rain on me

My life is falling in a tail spin all around me

My Grades are low

I have no place to go

I study hard but get no where

I'm in a mechanical tail spin

My gears need grease

My watch needs wound

I losing a minute an hour

Time after time

Before you know it I'll be an hour behind

No body knows No body cares

My heart is harden and my sight is blind

I'm a teenager out of control 

In an adult mind

Don't know where or when to take my chances

Life has me on the fence of second chances

Caught between teenager and the adult world

Got my mind in a whirl

Don't know the difference between heaven and hell

no relief no plan

I left the gang behind me to enjoy the adult world

My mind is spinning faster than a top in a spin off

I didn't plan this wreck of a life

out of control world from hell

just a child in an adult game

I have no one to blame but me

I'm trapped in a mind of a kid of fifteen

But I'm fifty seven

and can't get back in time

To save my teenage life.

Don't cry for me this is made up this is my Muse

Reviews

[Confuser]

Smitty/Jim: Great writing: I love it and feeling like a kid: wanting love that but life's "tail spinning" out of control 'aight no darn fun: but it always get better.
Time after time
Before you know it I'll be an hour behind
No body knows No body cares
My heart is harden and my sight is blind(My watch needs wound -I losing a minute an hour: (love it) Thank you so much again. Dale

[Valentine]

You had some really good lines in this write. Keep your muse going. Valentine

[wordman]

tail spin,i know this feeling well,

[Jamestown]

Wow friend, I know alot of people will be able to relate to this tail spin!
It seems we all have to ride the wave of crazy life, I understand this is your muse,
otherwise I would give you some encouragement, lol:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!