I am a wreck

bad breakups

I am a wreck 
 

I am a wreck Can't you see Since the minute  you had left me You had left no cause For that I applause For I know not what Is your cause All I do know is I am a wreck you see It's all about you don't you see My moods are changing for the worst My mind is about to burst You pick a bad time to have left You could made a jest I gave you my best I can't hide the rest You took my best than ran You kicked my can Now for sure I don't have a plan I am a nervous wreck for sure Just in time for another woman to explore I get loaded most every night To escape to another world where my troubles are non existence and my true love was in my life once again We worked it out but this is only my dream scape I have to live in reality and it's getting kind of tough She has left me raw and rough I just can't trust another soul My hearts melted and lost its gold I am standing around looking like a fool.

Reviews

[SonOfaSailor]

This poem definitely makes me feel for the you man... :( I get that emotion that pouring through the words and I can see your writing and rhyming improving since last time I was on this site. Keep struggling through, keep writing and keep on sharing!

[Valentine]

A sad write, from your other writes, I thought you were a happy person. Valentoine

[child of God]

I love how flowing the rhymes are thank you for the pending I'm sorry. About. The break up its a good poam. A lot of deep and raw emotions.

[luvs2write]

The pain and emotion was so raw in this poem...nice work. Keep writing!!