Eden

Eden

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Oh I found the garden

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Photo of the Painted Hills of Mitchell Oregon USA
Taken on a sunny day August 24-2014


I been to the mountain top
where I found God's Utopia
This secret garden of Eden
Blessed of all the lands

The one where he placed the man
and put him in a deep sleep
Taken the rib from Man
and Made him a mate

Female was her Name
From her reproduction was born
and that was the norm
Men Take a Woman

and make family
Share a life together
For the rest of their lives
The way God Planned it

No decease were spread
If only Man was true to his mate
No cheating would exist
May they have long life together

© 2015 SmittyJas


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Smitty, I thought it was lovely. All of your poems have a wonderful theme about family. Thank you. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


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And then the boundaries changed,man with man,woman with woman and all kinds of shenanigans!But live and let live I say.Beautiful picture Jim,enjoyed your poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the picture, the lines on the hills proves that this earth was covered with water. I know us Christians believe like you wrote this. I pray that God will solve the problems between two people. Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


In a perfect world Smitty...
Lovely thoughts here. What a gorgeous picture that is! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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