Loses The Pains of Love

Loses The Pains of Love

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Loses the pains of love the story of my life

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I envy those who have Loved
now that I have none
Loses mount battles lost not won
Loses the pains of Love

The story of my Life
just begun wasn't Fun
The true love of my life
left me for another man

Left me devastated wondering 
what to make of love in my life
I don't seem to wink at another woman
It seems I don't care

I figure I can live without love
For now it meaningless
Its lost its luster
I have moved on buster

It could be the cold winds
Of a winter blizzard
That keeps me away from exploring 
the warmths of love

Or I just don't want the hurts against
My heart that was broken
by what I called my only true love
God Please forgive me for not trying

To share a love
Another woman could of used it 
and not be so lonely tonight
I May Be selfish with my heart

I been thinking I been kind of smart
But giving up on love
Is only hurting my own heart
Loses the pains of love

Could be overtaken by a single win
When Love could be found again

© 2015 SmittyJas


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Smitty, I enjoyed it. Great writing and so honest; sad and moving; the way you wrote the character could be helping another woman; giving up on love and being alone in this world is very sad indeed. Thank you. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


What I loved more about this poem is that I saw my love leaving with someone else & I also blvd I can leave now without any caz wat I blvd to be true turned out to be not, so now I really scrutinize.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'm not much of a poet Smitty, but I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

Posted 9 Years Ago


The last grouping says it all. I would hope that all people never be lonely and find that special person in their lives. Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


We can only hope that love is not a once in a lifetime opportunity.
I believe it can come around again. I sure hope so!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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