We are dependent on love

Love and what really matters to us

We are dependent on love

It began with our God Above

Sending the human race here on earth

To make a rebirth

May we start over again

Make love burn at both ends

Meet me in the middle

My sweet and lovely Girl

I will throw you back out in a whirl

When love is our goal in the world

Nothing can hold us back

before scene two act one

Love on the stage

A romantic scene

Hand held by two

A glance in their eyes

Love exist on their hearts

God put the charms there from the start

Sparks fly

Love between two its a human feeling

Love and grace

Hope and respect

Many days ahead

Love will prevail above all

Reviews

[SonOfaSailor]

Hey Smitty! I hope you don't mind if I give you some constructive criticism :) The title and first line is a great beginning and building block for the poem (in my opinion) but it's not quite grammatically correct. Depending on how you meant it, 'We are dependent on Love' or 'We are the dependents of Love' would work. ..'dependents..' meaning that we are dependent on it, as a child would be to their parents, or an addict to their drug of choice.
I'm not sure what you meant by the 3rd stanza, first line? If you meant 'I will throw you* back out in a whirl' or if you meant it as it's written.
I'm really loving this poem, it's message is awesome! Second to last stanza; 'Love exist on their hearts' could be 'Love exists on(in?) their hearts' with the 'on' or 'in'.

[Valentine]

Of all the things we have to face on this earth, being alone is one of the worse. Having someone is a priveledge. Kathie