My temperature's rising

My temperature's rising

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Love fever and the flu

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My temperature's rising
I have love fever and the flu
Ever since I meet you
You are what brought my temperature high

You sure got me on the fly
You spread the flu and its germs
Like some lovers spread their fluids
And make love and children too

But there is nothing like the flu
Got that terrible germ
Some mist in the air
Spreading germs everywhere

I can't tell I can't hide
From this germ its viral 
and could cause blindness
If I was mindless

Love fever and the flu
You got me baby I got you
We share the love sick blues
Now that we are sharing the flu

Please don't leave me here alone
I tried too reach you on your phone
The answer machine is filled up to the core
With my old messages you call a bore

My Temperature rising can't you see
What a mess you made out of me
Your love sickness got the best of me
Set me free from you spell set me free

Love fever and the flu
Oh baby I got this from you
May the love potion take it away
Let it not come back another day

© 2015 SmittyJas


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this has a few songs bouncing around in my head at the moment.. think any of us that have been bitten can relate to this writing.. sure makes a mess of things in our hearts and in our heads... well expressed here.. they are the cause and the cure if such a thing exists.. nicely done..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Not only love sick but down with the flu too, you had better get rested up and let yourself get better. Poor guy..Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well, Smitty, this fellow here got it worse! I loved it and laughed too; except for the word "fluids" thought it would be a fun country blues song. Great writing and it's kinda "catchy" of a tune too. Got the flu too. Thanks. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 19, 2015
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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