The tree Swing

Fantasy of the first romance and the tree swing shared

It was spring time of the year

they was celebrating time spent together

About 3 months going steady

Boy Friend and Girl Friend

Sharing time at the oak tree

where there is a tree swing

Where in the sun he would push her

Back and forth she went

Talking about any subject they could think of 

To pass the time of day

Too and thou on the tree swing

Happily she smiled all day long

Their romance was on the fast track

to two hearts intertwining ways

A little peck on the cheek

and a small kiss on the lips

And Imagine what their child would look like

Seven lucky years down the line

When their romance became marriage

That lead to family ties

Everything falling in place in time

Hearts grown fonder with the years passing

All we knew is that we wanted to spend a lifetime together

And wanted no other to come between us 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

I like the simplicity of this piece. It is almost like a little memoir or journal entry. It has that personal feel to it.

[MoriartyMesa]

And Imagine what their child would look like


Now that was the selling point that tug at the heart.

[Valentine]

A sweet write, I liked the last grouping the best. Thank you for inviting me to read your work. Valentine

[Cody Williams]

Great poem Smitty! I'm not much of a "romantic" but I really enjoyed this one! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Matching Socks]

A beautiful love poem Smitty.
Being together in these simple ways is so wonderful.
When nothing else matters but the two of you and the possibilities...

[Confuser]

I thought it was a lovely poem Smitty. I especially like sentimenal love poems; I'm terrible at it I'm certain; never tried, but you let the honest words flow so honestly. Thank you - so sweet I could see them from the beginning, then seven year later. Poetry 101 Tag

[ANTO]

"Their romance was on the fast track
to two hearts intertwining ways" - a gem !

The only thing I had difficulty with with this stanza :-
"It spelled love between two lovers like these
It was at the oak tree swing
That fell in love
They looked to the future with imagination" - I felt 'love' was overused here and over-eggs the pudding.

The picture you paint is delightful though and a super write overall.