If its love your here for don't walk out that door

We are in loveland

and we have an understanding

Lets make this love 

Connection work

For the both of us

Darling if its love your here for

Don't walk out that door

I'm in the mood for love

I get tension when you are near me

My beloved sweetheart

You got rocket fuel in your engine

And your odometer

is stuck on full throttle

burning up more fuel

Than it should

We're not going to make it to

Our destination

Fuel light says we're on low

and we have no where else to go

We're going to miss the moon shot

Oh what the hell

Mother earth

You're looking good 

from up here in space

But we have lost all hope

and faith in God's Grace

We must abandon ship

Oxygen is what we have to exist

We look to the heaven's

We shall enter

for there will be no return

to Mother Earth

Life expectancy not much

Will join the saints 

if we must

It's God's will

In that we trust

Reviews

[ANTO]

I thought at the beginning - this would make a great song - it read lyrically in my head Smitty. I like the premise of the tale in the piece. Oxegon should be Oxygen - I live the spiritual thread Smitty.

[The Twin Arenas]

Hey Smitty. I really like the idea of "Loveland"

I'd suggest paying attention to the way a poem falls down a page in connection to the poem. the reader should be unable to stop (even if they'd like to). Nice work, though! Loveland is a great idea.