Love and her cubby cheeks

Love and her cubby cheeks

A Poem by SmittyJas
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I fell in love with her facial expressions

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Its been so long since I have mentioned
I loved the shape of her chubby cheeks
She has that rosy complexion 
Around her dimples and her cheeks

She has fine line around her eyes
Her mascaro draws to her private side
Her forehead I like to touch with my soft lips
Give an evening midnight kiss

I place my arms around your waist
I don't waste time or hesitate
You're my one and only soul mate
There is no debate

I love you with my tender heart
I see your mind I know your kind of smart
You share dear words for me at night
Prior to our bed night flight

You think I have all the riches one man could have
but I only count my riches when thinking of you
For your love and friendship will pull  me through
Any Storm the winds can master

Our love will measure up 
To the test of time
In our love I see no sin
And we will win the test of time

© 2014 SmittyJas


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very sweet and romantic ode to the one who resides in your heart.. I will say it was a little confusing how you went from she to you and I...

also a few things I noticed..

"She as that rosy complexion"...did you mean "has" instead of as?

"Your my one and only soul mate".... did you mean "you're" instead of your?

"Pryor to our bed night flight"... did you mean "prior" instead of pryor?






Posted 9 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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