You make my love Beautiful to be around

You make my love Beautiful to be around

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Description of my life since I have you in it.

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I couldn't imagine my life 
without you in it
Fun times would be a miss 
without you there beside me

Just my hand in yours
Is a pleasure 
and a treasure I adore
My eyes are fixed upon you

Our love will endure for centuries
And will be written down like a Shakespearian Play
Romance will fly off the pages
as a new cast a characters take stages

A new American Play write will be born
Stories lines will change
Much love scenes
remain the same

We'll be talking about lover's lane
And about love doesn't come 
without pain
And then a learning curve gain 
we learn to love again

The writer will break the curse 
and romance will win out over all
Love will have its gains and its falls
But when our back is against the wall 
:Love wins over all:

© 2014 SmittyJas


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A sweet and romantic poem written from the heart. So lovely my friend.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really sweet - I enjoyed it. Wonderful. thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your best poem ever Smitty! Well done!
I love the comparisons you drew and that ending, breaking the curse...
Fantastic!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2014
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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