Sentimantal fool

Sentimantal fool

A Poem by SmittyJas
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To the girl who said goodbye

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Sentimental Fool am I
ever since you said goodbye
Don't know where your going to turn up
But I be right there waiting

For you my love
To be in my arms once again
hold you close kiss you tight
don't let go with all my might

you will be my girlfriend once again
Since you left I only have one thing on my mind 
how to get you back in my arms once again
For I'm a sentimental fool

Most girl would like to date me 
they say I'm cool
Your not the only fish in the deep blue sea
But your the only fish for me

Come back baby come see about me
I'm not setting you free
your my girl the girl for me
To the girl who said goodbye

come back I'll take you back most any time
Your special to me I love you
I won't  set you free
for other guys to hold you and kiss your lips

they belong to me only me
I am the special man
with a special plan
but a sentimental fool am I

ever since you said goodbye
I should of known now since we have grown up
Our young love would never last
You have made me your thing of the past

© 2014 SmittyJas


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If only she knew that you have a Poet's heart... Sentimentality is not always foolish, SJ. A sweet romantic piece here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


greatly said and greatly flowed poem and also said with stong and great passion keep up the good work and nice write i enjoyed reading it ....

Posted 10 Years Ago


This really breaks my heart.
Sometimes we think grass might be greener but it seldom is...


Posted 10 Years Ago


Sweet love, hope she comes back. Thank you.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 9, 2014
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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