Your Whispers Melt My Heart

Dear Baby

Your Whisper Melted my heart

It must of been when we fell in love

the first night I held you tight

didn't want to let you go held you next to me

You sweet perfume you feel your touch

Crushed me all so much I wanted to be with you baby

Till the night was going to end 

and your sweet kisses set me free

Baby you mean the world to me

Your action your attraction My reaction

Your just to much for my heart

A little bit of love and I'll never fall in love again

It's just a romantic tug on two hearts

That never seem to come apart a love mended start

Two hearts Welded together that will never part

Like honey from the hive stick together

A love like glue pasted mended steady

Did I mention a happy ending

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Already knowing what love is doesn't seem like a fantasy
so beautifully penned Sir.


I write of Romance I am a hopeless romantic
and I write poems of Jesus what ever God inspires me to write.



This was simply Lovely BRAVO I read your message on HHN Group
and left a response this doesn't seem like a fantasy.




Beautiful Stanza's lines here.


It's just a romantic tug on two hearts

That never seem to come apart a love mended start

Two hearts Welded together that will never part

Like honey from the hive stick together



God Bless. Benita

[SmittyJas]

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment on my poetry it warms my heart and shows someone cares to read what I am writing about, Have a great Day.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome. same to you.

[Mirra]

Hi Sir :-) I read your message at HHN. You said there that some of your love poems are just fantasies and not real. But I must say that you have a wonderful love poem here, if I didn't read your message I would have thought that you've written this base from experience. I love the story of this poem, great work!

[SmittyJas]

Thank You For Your Kind Comment Sir but after finding the love of my life then divorcing her once I never gave love a chance again but I love to write about love and God's world of Second Chance.

[Mirra]

You're welcome :-)