I would Give up forever to see you

I would Give up forever to see you

A Poem by SmittyJas

To my Biggest fan the one I love the most in this world
I would give up forever to see you
Just to spend one more night
Eternity would not be so long

For one night with you would be forever in my sight
You're bigger than the biggest star in the galaxy 
You're brighter than it could ever could be
to me your my everything and I would stop at nothnig

to have one more night with you
For eternity means nothing to me If I don't have you
You're my starlet here on earth
you're not far as the Galaxy can be

I reach out and I touch her hands in mine
I could go blind girl as long as I have you as my guide
My tears would not fall like rain child
My tears not like rain

for as long as I have you for this one last night
I would give up forever to see you



© 2014 SmittyJas


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Sensitive and beautiful. I lost my husband one year ago and this writing really touched my heart. Thank you. God bless. Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such a beautiful and endearing read...to have a Love like this...and to sacrafice everything to give that Love back...sigh...I dream for this kind of Love. Awesome poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 2, 2014
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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