Echoes of love

Echoes of love

A Poem by SmittyJas
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We found love in the valley with echoes of love

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We broke camp that day
In the valley of love
We folded up our tent
Then moved on to a wonderful place
A place where the forest was greener
The meadows untouched
We found love in the valley
Oh the echoes of love
Could be heard for miles around
We had an adventure
an adventure for two
Love of my life
Best friends too
A love for a lifetime
I was happy I was with you
Love a place to call our own
Echoes of Love
In a place in the valley

© 2014 SmittyJas


Author's Note

SmittyJas
We shared our love in a place in the valley lasted a lifetime and then some more.

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this is nice indeed !
I like this

Posted 8 Years Ago


SmittyJas

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading me and leaving such a nice comment.
It's a feel good read, love should always be this comfortable...sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the sweet comment it touched my heart. Your kind words so sweet.
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it s really beautiful and very touchy . when i close eyes your words lead me to the lovely place

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your beautiful words in your comment it made my day and my heart glow.

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Added on July 12, 2014
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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