Our Love Echoes in the valley

Our Love Echoes in the valley

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Love grows in the valley where we live. In the littlest cabin of the woods. We Found Peace and harmony. With Big Hearted hope and Love.

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We found our Love
In the valley
Where no one thought it could grow
We had this the littlest cabin

Great for two
A place in the sun
Just a starter home
One to grow on

Maybe someday we"ll trade up
Then again we may stay here for Thirty Six years
Where we shed our blood sweet and tears
We shall many happy years

In the cabin in the woods
Where we started and had it good
It may have been small
but it had it all

Just a few rooms and a roof over our heads
and the love we shared
Two could not be happier
In a house that became a home

where we never felt alone
We had all the love we ever needed
we had each other
Our love completed
Happy in this small cabin we called home

© 2014 SmittyJas


Author's Note

SmittyJas
The happiness we found together would last us way past our prime.

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A beautiful and hopeful poem. Good to find love and home in a small cabin. I enjoyed the journey and positive feel of the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your wonderful review thanks for taking an interest in my poetry.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This tells the story of love being able to sustain itself within a simple life without all of the material possessions that most people think will improve their relationships and lives. True love should be able to blossom wherever and wherever. lovely poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the perfect observance of this works and words your comment was a pleasure to read and re.. read more
audrie

10 Years Ago

you're absolutely welcome!

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Added on July 11, 2014
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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