Love her till the Sun don't rise

Love her till the Sun don't rise

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Everlasting Love between me and a woman of my dreams

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A special love between you and I
I'll love her till the sun don't rise
I'll see the grace within her eyes
I'll love her till the sun don't rise

this is an everlasting love between you and I
and I'll love you till the sun don't rise
It come to me as no surprise
I'll love you till the sun don't rise

Even if the day stood still
We would laugh and I would love you till
The sun don't rise I'll keep your photo on my window sill
Even if the sun fallen from the sky

To you my love I tell no lies
I'll love you till the day I die
Even if the sun don't rise
and our lives have come to an end

We"ll walk on greener pastures still
Up in heaven where every things new
I find the path that takes me to you
We'll share a life for heavily two

© 2014 SmittyJas


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I love this it is very beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment your love of my work brings a smile to my face.
From the look of your avatar you're both very attractive and I'm sure there are a lot of unhappy guys around that are sad they couldn't be with either one of you. You look like a great couple. This is a nice poem and I'm sure it's from the heart. It could use a little work but you did a nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Did you ever love some one as if time stood still
I sure if you did you would talk about it till the earth stood still
A love like ours could not be repeated only at the end completed
And when in heaven will meet again and talk about the good time we had and be glad.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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