Simpler times for us

Simpler times for us

A Poem by SmittyJas
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A love poem for the slower side of life when things were not so hectic

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We had a time when Life was simpler
When we weren't crushed for time or space
Love had room to grow it had its place
In our hearts and minds
Our souls intertwined 
In a world that was so unkind
But love was blind
We had our love to keep us together
When we could not pay off the credit card
and a meal was a loaf a bread and some jam
But we had our love to get us by
As we tried we tried
Things got tougher every day
The bills did not go away
every body wanted payed
Oh all the bills we had made
our love got us through 
when it was only me and you
We didn't have time to fight
I had to run for the next flight
we did not feel alone
as we had Jesus by the phone
Call him up for some help
We made it on a wing and a prayer
Thanks to God we had our savings in the bank
or we would of been under the tank
our hearts were so intertwined
I could not tell yours from mine

© 2014 SmittyJas


Author's Note

SmittyJas
in those days we were very humble
when our world started to crumble

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'/simpler Times for us'
Smitty Jas,
Hard work and little leisure time does create a place for focus on what is important.
Healthy relationship with that spouse takes on great meaning and is precious.
Yes it does keep a heart strong. Your poem is very relevant because many know
the value of hard and consistent labor and earning our way.
A beautiful write:
"We made it on a wing and a prayer
Thanks to God we had our savings in the bank
or we would of been under the tank
our hearts were so intertwined
I could not tell yours from mine."
Blessings to you and yours.
Kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is simply beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
Claire

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment it makes me smile to see that someone took the time to read and leave a good.. read more
Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Your comment is well taken and a joy to my heart.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most wellcome
well written awareness of reality changes in our society. great lines that describe from simple things that become complicated. well done. thank you for share

Posted 10 Years Ago


SmittyJas

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your comments on my works of poetry.

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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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