My Home is Where My Heart Belongs

My Home is where my heart belongs

I heard this in a song

About two in love for a life time

And the way they made there house a home

Loving was the name of the Game

Played 24 / 7 along the way

Made the perfect couple

Happier in a home full of love

and not a game was played

It was serious one on one

Love rooted in loves return

Some gave and some earned

Some saved their love along the way

In a house made a home with loves refrain

Steering out the window pane

Of the home with the white picket fence

My home is where my heart belongs

She never got tired of me singing this old song

May you find the love of your desires

In a house that's made into a home with love attached

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

SmittyJas,
Anything worth having (a strong mature relationship is worth working for.) "Love rooted in love's return" so many meaningful lines within "My Home is Where My heart is" We need to be reminded to be thankful too. Loved reading a new writer (to me) and I also enjoy people's early work too. Bless you..................Kathy

[Valentine]

Some gave all, and some earned all, sounds very sweet. Valentine

[Thea]

Nothing feels better than having a home where you can share your heart with the people you love. This was nicely-penned. The emotions were poured in a very pure way. Such a heartfelt poem.

[SmittyJas]

Thanks for your comments my poem was a success it hit its mark it make me proud to be a writer again.

[Thea]

I'm glad to hear about that. Keep writing. :)

[Rene Salinas]

I must be the dumbest when it comes to this kind of feelings and proabbly the fact that someone ever came to relate to me in a romantic way was a fluke, but as I as say this on one hand there is a powerfull presence of a longing, a desire, a confession of relation of sifnificant proportions yet for some reason it is forced to live somewhere in this case the image of the song but in the meantime what warms the feeling what makes it desirable seems to be the selflessness, the honesty, the desire for growth the wonderfull time playing together. So if some of those feeling have been outpored into all it has done, Wouldn't the image of the heart seem to confide its magnificence?

I could try to be more intellectual but I think is already fringing on annoying so sorry if does.

Thankyou for the heart warming image though.

[SmittyJas]

Your comment has warmed my heart you done quit well expressing yourself. Thanks .

[Coyote Poetry]

The song is true. Home is where you feel safe and sound. I had many places I called home. Home is where we have family and friends near. Life is okay. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SmittyJas]

Thanks to your poem I know my poem has its heart in the right place.

[Edward Lancheister]

well describe about home that far value mean from house, house not always mean a home. but home always be a house of the heart. thats what i get when read the poem. thanks for share

[SmittyJas]

Thanks again for commenting on my poetry I can tell you this one came from the heart and all I have learned from life growing up in a loving family.

[SmittyJas]

I enjoy a good successful love story. Here's hoping you agree.