words

words

A Poem by Ronniejamessmith

Tired of all the pain and blood bled just so I can pretend
the back no longer a tree but a branch wich can't hold it's
leaves and wants but one thing. To dream

© 2012 Ronniejamessmith


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Doing all the typing on little smart phone . THANK YOU!

Posted 12 Years Ago


the words are powerful all bunched up as they are, but i have to wonder if they were separated, so that the emphasis falls on the right words in the right places, would they be even stronger?

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can't quite decide but it's possible that's the deepest thing I ever read. Or.. it's above me. Fun read.

wich=which

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ronniejamessmith
Ronniejamessmith

Colorado springs, CO



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