My beautiful crazy lover

Came home one day and saw his face and just had to write about him.

How happy his face makes me
How beautiful his face is
I see him and everything else is meaningless
I see his face and I melt
I'm putty in his hands
I scream touch me!
Hold me!
Kiss me!
Love me!
He pulls me close and I lose it
How soft his touch yet rough and purposeful
His kiss is bitter sweet
Like dark chocolate mixed with vodka
As his energy travels through my veins
He ignights me
My mind is a blur
It's like being drunk and sober at the same time
Confusing but Crystal clear
He's like a prescription drug
So bad yet feels so good
He's a good man with a sinner's eyes
So beautiful but dangerous
He's everything and more
My beautiful crazy lover

Author's Note

My relationship is strange but I wouldn't change it for the world

Reviews

[barleygirl]

One of my favorite things about good writing is to use contrasts, since life is full of them. I love the way you put these contrasts together in an artful & original way. Your descriptions are fresh & not at all the typical things people over-use for loving situations: “rough & purposeful” . . . “bittersweet chocolate with vodka” . . . “drunk & sober” . . . being predictable & uniform can be so boring to me! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Jas]

I’m so glad you like it! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me

[Chris Shaw]

Wow, you certainly draw the reader in. Intense feelings you have for your crazy lover. YOu convey these well to the reader. Nicely expressed.

Have a lovely day

Chris

[John the Baptist]

Good use of imagery in this one. The poet makes us feel what she feels. Dark chocolate and vodka? Have to try it.

[Jas]

Lol it's pretty good, one of my favorites. I'm glad you can see the imagery and sense the emotions