Memories

just a short piece on how memories effect the here and now

The gentle flow of wind

Redolent of times flown by

Most snuff scents of pleasure

Mais à  moi?

The breeze is a bitter fetor

Of a memory long slaughtered

 

Convivial Couples caper

Along the wretched earth

Most feel felicity

Mais à  moi?

It is a world unwilling

To exculpate the damaged

 

Night esurient for light

Indulges every fold of land

Most find it innocuous

Mais à  moi?

Caliginosity is a sadistic showman

Releasing the tigers of the past

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Ahh magnificent.. I do believe you have captured the very essence of purity in so deep a piece..
The rhythm I did like... Very nice..

J'ai vraiment appr�ci�


Mag xx

[Koeseki]

C'est tr�s bon! Flows very well, and i like the style. Not my favorite type of rhythm, but correctly and well done.

[Geminair]

wow i love this and the way its written flows so well thank you for shareing

[Alicia™]

Cool poem...!