Sin of Time

Yesterday's gone;

Today's present;

Tomorrow's hope;

Nothing's forever.

To look behind

Is Forbidden Lust.

The way forward

An Unlikely Trust.

Reviews

[nyi]

like this..short and succinct..

[Coffee Vampier]

such sort words with such power!

To look behind
Is Forbidden Lust.

I like that part them most. It gives the poem depth.

[BrynnaW.]

Wow.. This poem really makes me think of the days that have gone by and the days that are to come. Good job and keep writing!

[TJ]

the first thing that comes to mind is that the flow of this poem is amazing. wonderful. and the subject is great...forget the past, hope for the future, but LIVE in the present

[Jouni Sakari]

Deep thoughs , need to reflect . . . what time is ? Now it's like a dot on a line , that curves spiraling back and forth making that line of time :

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[joshua deathdealer]

This is my favorite so far from the contest. Excellent work

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I think this poem speaks souch volume. In just your20 words you say so much. I really loved this one

[*[_Natasha_]*]

love this!

[dutch2lips]

a good poem

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strong words. Time is fair for the all of us. Need to use time wisely and keep going in the right direction. A excellent poem.
Coyote