Not together!

"distanced" on so many levels...

He asks: 

Where are you?

She says: 

I am here.

He says:

You are not here.

You are there. 

There is not here.

I am here.

There is where you are.

Here is where you are not.

If you were here,

We'd be together.

Hence here

Is where you are not...

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....very clever wordplay. The romantic longing peeks out from between the staccato lines. Good one. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

A good one. He is telling her that she is not physically there and she is telling him ev en though she might not be there physically she is still there in his heart...Bravo...........

[Coffee Vampier]

Wow, truly one to make me think..... I love it :)

[Akshat♥]

lol...this make me smile:)
finally she is not here..and poem is perfectly good here..
and you did a good job there..lol

[nyi]

lol..you make a simple thing so confusing and provoking with so simple word..I like this idea..

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Arwa, This is a pretty cool twist of words and in the end, you ened uo exactlly where you needed to be. Your pen must have been fuul of special ink when you wrote this one.

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the twist in the words as well. Brilliant penning.

[dutch2lips]

made me smile this, a good poem, well penned

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you twist the words. Some conversations can end up with no real answer. I like the way you ended the interesting poem.
Coyote