Happy but Hurt
A Poem by
-Scribe in Style-
You make sure I am happy When life is rather crappy. You turn my tears into laughter Then we sit and cuddle together. You eat unhealthy fast foodBecause I'm in that kind of mood - Sometimes we play table tennis Even though my skills need practice - You take me for an evening walkSpend hours when I want to talk - You unwind with me on a movie nightBut we have not yet been to fly a kite. These moments I have not forgotten... The memories will never go rotten... This is not my reason for complain.. When I say I am hurting and in pain ... I trust Your love I know You care Of all Your feelings I am deeply aware Please forgive me Just this one time We'll work this out And be more than fine
© 2011 -Scribe in Style-
Reviews
I love the way that you used font to accentuate certain pieces of the poem. Its vague enough to be interesting. I highly enjoyed reading it. Short and sweet phrases with a pointed meaning! Thankyou for sharing!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Sweet poem overflowing with feelings of love. Nicely penned.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Sweet poem overflowing with feelings of love. Nicely penned.
Full of emotions..that's why I loved it!!
at the end love is what matters..
so much truth in it...
you touched my heart right from the starting:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Full of emotions..that's why I loved it!!
at the end love is what matters..
so much truth in it...
you touched my heart right from the starting:)
A very love-filled poem, i enjoyed every bit of it :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
A very love-filled poem, i enjoyed every bit of it :)
honest poem filled with love, well written
Posted 13 Years Ago
honest poem filled with love, well written
This is very touching and sweet. Nice write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is very touching and sweet. Nice write.
I love this. Such a beautiful, reality in your face write!! I love it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love this. Such a beautiful, reality in your face write!! I love it.
I loved the imagery here. The way you described the things the two of you used to do together gave me such a clear picture of the happiness and enjoyment you guys shared. The ending was right on as well
Posted 13 Years Ago
I loved the imagery here. The way you described the things the two of you used to do together gave me such a clear picture of the happiness and enjoyment you guys shared. The ending was right on as well
such depth in the simplicity of expressive emotions~ there is a subtle playfu quirkyl air apparent as well that I really like~ well done~
Posted 13 Years Ago
such depth in the simplicity of expressive emotions~ there is a subtle playfu quirkyl air apparent as well that I really like~ well done~
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Added on June 1, 2011
Last Updated on June 1, 2011
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