Party Girl

I'm a lucky girl
In a happy world
It's fantastic
Enthusiastic
On a rocking chair
Have a love affair
Imagination,
Life is my creation

Come to party, Smell of cherry
Ah Ah Ah Yeah!

I’m a dolly doll
On the dance floor
It’s impulsive
And seductive
On a dance pole
Doing rock and roll
I have momentum
Diva is my rhythm

Throw a party, Get all crazy
Ah Ah Ah Yeah!

I’m a pretty Queen
On the centre screen
Its attention
3^rd dimension
Wearing just a gown
Going down to town
My decision
Living my ambition

Time to party, Stand up freely
Ah Ah Ah Yeah!

Author's Note

What do you think of this composition that could be sung as a song or read as a poem.
It is totally not my comfort zone, yet it appeared on paper.. so let me know! :)

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

Yeah you're right about the comfort zone. It's stiff in places...all parodies are. So work on that :)

[Veronica Chandler]

This is a very nice composition which is well constructed and spoken; I find when my creations please me most it is because I wrote it while completely out of my own comfort zone. While I am not always pleased with my own work I have found they were written unknowingly for another. I make collages and craft jewlery also and experience the same feeling in those areas. I may actually dislike a piece of jewlery which turns out to absolutely delight another, and these are the times I come to realize piece was always to lift another to their own joy. Very nice piece Araw!

[Joiedevivre]

Fun reendition of Barbie girl, i can just hear it playing in the club