Tanka - Shadow

Mystique silhouette

Sunlight creates a dark patch -

Posture of patterns.

Secret shadow revealing

An outline of our being.

Author's Note

Posture of patterns OR Patterns of posture?
What is the difference? Is there a difference.. Both in my mind paint a different picture.. What do you think?

Reviews

[dan]

The picture you paint is a near masterpiece! I don't think which phrase is used matters that much, the meaning is pretty much encapsulated by the rest of the lines, the message is virtually the same. Either way, this is such a thought provoking piece...outstanding! take care...dan