Body's Trap to Release.

A response to an artist's creation.

A girl closes her eyes
and follows a refuge path laid out by her thoughts.
She forces her way through,
Her arms pulling and her thighs pushing,
Rattling and raging her body through exhausted emotions.
Tangled she is;
and restrained from hurling outward.
Her system is submerged in an overload.
A rapid rush clots a hemorrhage of hormones.
She firms her mind and tenses her grip
to restrict the violent vibrations
as her brain bursts into an overflow of toxic substance;
The body feels a surge of an unidentified marker,
Her muscles rustle
and then her tears thrust in a time lapse of fluster. 

Slowly,  steadily, she let's the nervous system sensuously take over.
Relentless in trying to control and compose, 
the internal signature structure
is set off by signals of sly subconscious sneakers
she subversively slips into a seat of silent sighs...
Stretching soundly across the seconds.

Reviews

[dan]

This piece seems to be trying to explain what goes on in the body and soul when one feels trapped within a structured restraint with no end in sight. The pushing and pulling, the pounding need for freedom, intensifying exponentially as time expands outward. Such vividly descriptive wording takes the reader on a field trip through this ragged thought process, this struggle. Great write! take care...dan

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the use of description. Poem needed to be read a few times. The use of the language was amazing.
"Her system is submerged in an overload.
A rapid rush clots a hemorrhage of hormones. "
Like the above lines. each set of lines create visions and struggle. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thanks for taking the time dear poet! :) Sometimes the words just flow when you see something that has limitless emotion.
A

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.