Haiku - Sun peeks and sleeps

Inspired by a painting done by an artist of a sun hidden behind a mountain silhouette with vibrant colours to make up the sky and shades to create waves.

Darkest secrets hide

Vibrancy shines, reaches far,
Sun rises, sun sets, high.  

Reviews

[dan]

I wish I could write these shorter formats, I'm way too verbal (verbose?). This flows so smoothly and elegantly. Beautiful. take care...dan

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thank you so much.
I am trying now to make writing a habit such that I do not actually have to sit down to do it - so if I can put a thought to the simplest thing - I find this is the quickest and easiest way of doing it...

[dan]

It's not always easy to make something you WISH to be a habit happen. But you really can, Arwa. I see the way that you write, brightly; it seems to me that to force it would possibly detract from the success that you have just letting it flow naturally. Just keep doing that. Best advice that I can give you. A very nice write, Arwa. take care...dan

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thanks Dan! Always appreciated ~
A

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This is quite lovely, my dear poet :)

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thanks Lynn

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words with positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thank you for taking the time
A

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure and you are welcome.