Tanka - Classy Chameleon

Revolving power;
Chameleon leaves set time
Trees define season
Elements of Earth and Sky
Forges forces: Fire, Wind and Rain.

Author's Note

The last line was previously:
Forges forces: Fire, Wind, Water.

I wasn't sure which was more effective?

Reviews

[dan]

Arwa, I think Rain is a more forceful, powerful word, perfect to join Fire and Wind. Your writing in the tanka builds the impression of an urgency to project the message, with the backing power to convey each nuance splendidly. take care...dan

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thank you so much! Your review has really boosted my confidence..
Sometimes writing in short verse requires much more thought and choice of words need to have an immediate impact on the reader. Thanks again
A