Broken Ideas

Love is a lie

All it does is breaths a sigh

And in the end it will make you cry

Because what ever love is, it will die.

It gives a promise, 

Before long turns to compromise

Though the thought is not fully lost

Your hopes and dreams are its final cost.

You pave understanding, 

How far the path goes is amazing

Shocks and surprises are outstanding

Ignorance in forgive and forget isn't pleasing.

Inside a failure, 

Outside is a shell cover

Kill yourself into a stereotype

So that you become the perfect prototype. 

Reviews

[Aella Magne]

I love it! I think you portrayed love - love as a falseness - very well here. Looking forward to reading more of your writings!

[Cid]

"Love is a lie
All it does is breaths a sigh
And in the end it will make you cry
Because what ever love is, it will die."

Review :
This above one phrase is what that comes from the real lives of livings. "Love is really a very #suspense thing coz, it's virtual and as a heart needs more and more beats into the heart to live as same as a heart love needs or desires for more heats that comes from livings, that makes the life gorgeous living but sometimes love hurts much and sometimes it's seemed damn tough to consume for livings because "love gives everything whether it's happiness or sadness, it's love that brings "Good" and "Worst" time into the life and we live with it coz, it's all on us what kinda time we want to live with, it's all in our hands, it's all over the hands how to control, how to move, how to walk, how to talk, how to make the clock so fast at all...but apart from much pains at all, love remains still love beautiful love is only a thing that keeps everyone in touch because it feels, it does feel the feel of the other heart.
"Love is everywhere, In you, in me, in them, in those who live or don't, in air, in breeze, in heat, in breeze of every heartbeat."

Rating : 1000/100!
Note : ("Love keeps the two souls together but it's a love too that keeps them apart either." So, love is #Virtual, if you want to make to #Static to your heart then just hear the voice of your heart and do what the soul of your body allows you to in a right way because to make love for the long time, for life, love needs time so that time could bring some damn beautiful sunshine with the angels of nights." "lol")

[Ahena MK]

Good reading ... Nice one
Ahena

[Praveeta]

You have depicted reality so nicely. I enjoyed reading your piece.

[-Scribe in Style-]

Thank you

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[Moiz Rasheed]

I love this poem .. my brain is trying to decrypt this..

[-Scribe in Style-]

Don't think too much over words and phrases that i write, I just hope that reading it brings meaning to your mind.

[Moiz Rasheed]

it sure does bring the meaning but m trying to decrypt the exact meaning.

[Odysseus Wanders]

I like the poem... what it wakes up in my mind is this: that there are may types of love. And the love you describe and unmask so elegantly , is the love that is: untruthful, momentary, sad, and abandoning... other forms of its attributes to you espy as well. And finally at its end, reveal the real monster in wait... perfectionism! How many times have I killed myself into a stereotype? Oh you cut a blade deep... and many I'm afraid, and learning in every instance. I love that your eyes see this. And does the love I speak in praise of your poem... is it too, born of the same stock and breed? I know not, but still would I love all the same. Wonderful poem. Thank You.

[-Scribe in Style-]

There are many types of love, which is why no one can answer the question of what it really is. It is difficult going through each of the stages.
Thank you so much. Your insight is much appreciated.

[Odysseus Wanders]

i have heard... that to the extent that I can be myself, in the presence of another, is to the extent that I can experience love, with that person... So yes, many types... and they all present a certain learning curve. Thanks again Arwa-