A Broken hearted Girl

She wears a mask to hide the pain

No see she torn apart

she holds her broken heart in her hands

The tears she cries for the one she lost 

the quite echos with every breath

one touch is all she remember 

the words whispered before he left

"always and forever" 

those words no longer hold meaning

she cries for the girl who she locked away

she pretends to be over it

but in all truth she wants to have him 

He wants her.. forever and always

she want to have him for truth and love

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very heartfelt, touching and emotion.
Poems always make for the best poems, when the reader can feel the emotions through the poem, this poem does just that.
I enjoyed this read very romantic yet emotional, heartbreaking write......
Great poem :)

[Sarmelendez]

Thank you, I am glad that you can feel the emotion in this.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome anytime :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Sarah, A broken hearted girl.
I must say much heartfelt and so touchy. You are able to describe your poem with art of broken hearted girl throughout very well.

Loved you composition and art of expression.

God Bless.
Singh :)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you.

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome dear

[Sami Khalil]

You have touched on the broken heart elements with great detail and skill. A very good read ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you. I just write raw and real emotion or what i see and feel

[Sami Khalil]

God to know. Good way to go...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)